The first luxury SUV is the 2012 Acura MDX. In my opinion this vehicle is the definition of comfort due to its tri zone climate control. With the tri zone climate control the kids can control their temperature in the rear seats, while both people in the front seats can control the temperature to their own liking(2012 Acura MDX).
How I would fix this quote is by:
Adding in who said the MDX had Tri-zone climate control as well as give a quote which he said as to why he thought the climate control was such a wonderful feature of the SUV. I think the example in the book that goes according to X "____" would work well to introduce my quote as well as give the name of who is quoted.
The second quote is:
The second vehicle I chose to compare in my “best luxury vehicle contest” is the 2012 Lexus 350. This is one of the cheapest vehicles I have to compare at around 40,000 new(2010 Lexus RX 350).
How I would fix this quote is by:
I could find a quote from a car review specialist stating that the Lexus was one of the cheapest SUV's in the luxury market. As well this one could use the example according to X "_____". Followed by stating how he is credible and why the cheap Lexus is important in my research.
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